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CCU 0.3 - Do Boys Gossip? by simpleCOMICS

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Okay well first off the comic is done rather well. The background doesnt over take or draw attention from what's happening. The character's eye movements are spot on, when ted is talking to Zoe the eye contact is there. When he turns around when some guy is talking in the background i dont think it was the best way to show that. At the end of the comic Ted said that he wasnt kept in the loop so, he shouldnt have turned around. He could have moved his eyes back to show that he was listening. Overall its a very well done comic and i hope that my critique helped.
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